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A nice sound, but the lyrics aren't doing much for me.
This song is well done, and I've gone over those sections Nuzman89 seems to think are, in his opinion, not quite right. It is a good practice to listen to the 'questionable' section of music multiple times, and at different volume/EQ settings. I've taken a considerable amount of time to check the quality of the take, and find it to be an issue of 'pushing the vocal against the limiter'.. it sounds, to my ear, like the vocalist was at a different distance from the mic durring that take. This has nothing to do with the quality of the the songwriting, or the vocal performance, and I don't think it should have been mentioned. If I were to be that critical about all songs in this competition, you would be reading 300 pages of text.
Real nice...This is a refreshing, interesting song...nice arrangement....nice instrumentation. The vocal is executed beautifullyl. Nicely Done. My only negative that sticks out at me in every chorus is quick breathe or more likely a 'punch in' right before the line"....All ready moved on." It's distracting...it doesn't sound natural. Best Of Luck!