I thought that the message here was great. All of the elements came together nicely and never once overpowered me too much in one way or another
Use of effects was great as well, although there were times that I wanted the resonances for your sweeps to stand out more center stage
Lastly, I feel like despite how good a message this song delivers, it lacks that sellable hook that packs in a floor. I think this could be achieved through a little more development in the sequencing and by adding a few "more" interesting timbres to the mix for your choruses
Otherwise, great effects, message, and good mix. Just get me a better hook either musically or vocally, doesn't matter which, this song will reach epic heights. Almost there
Comments for The World Is Beautiful
Use of effects was great as well, although there were times that I wanted the resonances for your sweeps to stand out more center stage
Lastly, I feel like despite how good a message this song delivers, it lacks that sellable hook that packs in a floor. I think this could be achieved through a little more development in the sequencing and by adding a few "more" interesting timbres to the mix for your choruses
Otherwise, great effects, message, and good mix. Just get me a better hook either musically or vocally, doesn't matter which, this song will reach epic heights. Almost there