PlayLovesick Soul

Yeah. Agree with Fate of Nines and The Maybenaughts here...

Having a real hard time voting for it unfortunately because it so close to The Cure song, Just Like Heaven. It is the intro guitar sound a notes, but otherwise it is an awesome song. I would suggest changing the sound of the guitar in the intro. Listen to the Just Like Heaven and you will see what I mean. It is so close. People tend to look for rip offs on this site, that sound is so "The Cure" that it is hard not think of anything else and it dilutes the open mindedness one is looking for.

"Show me, show me, show me how you do that tric
The one that makes me scream" she sai
"The one that makes me laugh" she sai
And threw her arms around my nec
"Show me how you do i
And I promise you I promise tha
I'll run away with yo
I'll run away with you"