PlayPast Time Prisoner

Song's a bit monotonous. Not a bad effort, but needs more to hold interest. Vocals show promise.

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Good guitar work. Compsition is fine. Vocalization needs work to keep from swallowing the second half of some phrases, and to maintain the best tone and focus on mid range notes. Certainly the vocal end of things needs as much effort as the guitar has received, since it's half the battle in selling the song to any audience except the deaf. You are easily capable of accomplishing anything you want if you put the requisite effort and time into it, and would be miles ahead by putting in the effort as others have done before you, to get where you want to be someday soon. Try it! I think you'll like it.