Probably my comments can't help too much,because I like more unusual music,not (always) the popular one.Although sometimes I am suprised,that songs that I consider to be very good are not even among the 100 best in the standings.That's why I decided to make my top 40 to encourage these artists too.Your song probably remains outside the 40,but it would be between 50-60 from the 436 songs I have judged in march.In your place I would think about working more with the first 50 seconds,and develope it to a beautiful slow song,and have what comes after as a seperate song.
I thank you for being honest,you might be right,it is alittle abrupt, I have lyrics to "Lost" that version is just not posted. I have a vision of what I want "Lost" to be. I just dont have anyone to help me with it. Everything I do,I do alone.
The meaning of my message was,that I liked so much the intro,that could have listened to a similar music much longer.The continuation was also good,but I didn't expect that.Maybe I am wrong,but I had the feeling,it does not pass so well to the first part.